A Different Love Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Different Love

Rating: 4.4


There was very little physical about their love,
It went well beyond all that,
Like two Swans whose necks intertwine,
Creating an everlasting bond,
They embraced, floating away together,
Into the Eternity of Time,
Forever

Sunday, March 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Mcparland 02 December 2014

So simply and wonderfully beautiful. A true expression and telling of a true pure love rarely ever known by most but exists, and those who know it are the luckiest people on earth. A true 10++

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Terry Craddock 15 September 2014

Simplistic, indifferent to stylistic form and traditions, yet as beautiful as two swans necks intertwined, floating together within the waters of eternity.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 September 2014

It is the same love what many preachers had preached to develop in the hearts of human.. Here, you have written about the friends, but loving an enemy may change our mind set to believe the effects of the eternal love in one's heart, mind and body, that's the reason the sages look younger to their age..so to look younger we have to develop the feeling of love for every human around the world, just like these two swans intertwined with their necks not with the corporate deals nice poem.. Congratulations

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Sandra Feldman 16 September 2014

Yesterday, Sept.15,2014 I was Queen for a Day. But not of a Country nor a Kingdom I was allowed to enter a tiny corner of the hearts of those that read this simple poem, What a Joy! Indescribable. To be able to touch others with words, make them feel, maybe a tiny instant of Love, beauty and illusion. What better Kingdom? Thank you All for reading and for your lovely, comments! Every one of them touched me deeply. I also want to thank PoemHunter for giving me this honor for which I am truly grateful. Sandra Feldman

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Walterrean Salley 20 September 2014

Congrats on your selected poem of the day. Sincere and profound thoughts on one of the most important subjects in life- expressed in purity. Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 April 2021

A DIFFERENT LOVE amazing poem still, Masterpiece and gem, great Love Poem by the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing this immortal poem 5 Stars Full. God's Blessings in Abundance, fondest Sylvie

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Deluke Muwanigwa 24 March 2021

Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Great poem

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Captain Cur 24 March 2021

A gorgeous write! Exquisite, as are the purity of love and swans!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 March 2021

Heart touching poem, beautifully worded, true love well captured.5 Stars Full and to my Favourites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 February 2021

Beautifully crafted in just minimal lines. Great imagery. To my Poem List.

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