There was very little physical about their love,
It went well beyond all that,
Like two Swans whose necks intertwine,
Creating an everlasting bond,
They embraced, floating away together,
Into the Eternity of Time,
Forever
It is the same love what many preachers had preached to develop in the hearts of human.. Here, you have written about the friends, but loving an enemy may change our mind set to believe the effects of the eternal love in one's heart, mind and body, that's the reason the sages look younger to their age..so to look younger we have to develop the feeling of love for every human around the world, just like these two swans intertwined with their necks not with the corporate deals nice poem.. Congratulations
Simplistic, indifferent to stylistic form and traditions, yet as beautiful as two swans necks intertwined, floating together within the waters of eternity.
You have very poetically described an unconditional love, almost divine, in a perfect poem of fascinating love. It sends the mind looking and wishing for this type of love, but it is very rare in life to find it. Thank you. RoseAnn
The physical side to a loving relationship is a bonus. Love has so much more to offer.
How can you not like such a wonderful poem on LOVE. The purity of love is difficult to capture in words yet this poem of yours did it brilliantly.
A DIFFERENT LOVE amazing poem still, Masterpiece and gem, great Love Poem by the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing this immortal poem 5 Stars Full. God's Blessings in Abundance, fondest Sylvie
A gorgeous write! Exquisite, as are the purity of love and swans!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So simply and wonderfully beautiful. A true expression and telling of a true pure love rarely ever known by most but exists, and those who know it are the luckiest people on earth. A true 10++