Sandra Feldman

A Different Love - Poem by Sandra Feldman

There was very little physical about their love,
It went well beyond all that,
Like two Swans whose necks intertwine,
Creating an everlasting bond,
They embraced, floating away together,
Into the Eternity of Time,

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about A Different Love by Sandra Feldman

  • Rebecca Lyle (3/24/2017 9:14:00 PM)

    I thought your poem was lovely, short but to the point. (Report) Reply

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  • Norah Tunney (3/23/2017 6:59:00 PM)

    Short and concise yet this poem expresses so simple and so beautifully the depths of a love beyond time and space. Thank you Susan (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (2/23/2017 10:52:00 PM)

    Oh, How Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Sweeps The Heart Away! ! ! ! !
    With The Magical Words You Say! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much! ! ! ! !
    For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++++
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  • Robert Murray Smith (2/10/2017 10:25:00 PM)

    A nice love poem Sandra.+++10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2016 3:48:00 AM)

    How rare and beautiful is this spiritual love! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Jr Cuyam (12/8/2016 5:47:00 AM)

    Differently versed poem. nice to read (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (9/28/2016 7:29:00 PM)

    A great poem about love Sandra. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2016 4:06:00 AM)

    Swans are a symbol of purity and innocence...Such a beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2016 11:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful depiction of love. Very tightly worded, yet enough to convey the right mood of the poem to the reader. Congrats. Keep writing and continue sharing.
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  • Susan Williams (4/5/2016 12:30:00 PM)

    There is a lot of soul being loved when love eclipses the physical- a pure and lasting love. The few whose love includes both the passion of the physical and the purity of the spiritual have the best of all worlds in one. Excellent poem- I love the simplicity, the brevity, and the image of the swans (Report) Reply

  • Brian Mayo (10/22/2015 10:43:00 PM)

    This makes me think of high-school sweethearts who reconnected in their old-age, and never left each other again.
    Moving and succinct- -tough to pull-off but you did it.
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (10/10/2015 12:10:00 AM)

    I like the brevity, imagery, and movement of this poem... It works... Message conveyed. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Sranisha Francis (9/18/2015 4:47:00 PM)

    Into the Eternity of Time,

    In to the Eternity of Joy forever. This my prayer.
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  • (9/3/2015 9:53:00 PM) lovely...and beautiful ★ (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (8/11/2015 8:56:00 AM)

    This poem is very direct, precise and well penned. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • (8/1/2015 11:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful. short and precise. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (5/7/2015 12:31:00 AM)

    I enjoyed this poem on 'platonic love'! I think this is the highest form of love when a man and woman in a deep relationship are able to give to one another without the lure of sexual passions! Such love is love abstract with all sediments strained out and can last longer! The image of two swans with necks intertwained and floating away is quite lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    This is a quiet, serene poem, because in the words of John Milton All passion spent - and the partners can move in sync because no divisive emotions interfere. Your poem expresses lyrically the same relationship that Shakespeare
    described metaphysically in his almost impenetrable lyric poem THE PHOENIX AND THE TURTLE(DOVE) . The poem is such an extreme example of Shakespeare's transcendent poetic genius I always read it to my students. As a poet, he acquired such skill in fusing language, compressing metaphors, tightening syntax, it's amazing all of this coiled energy didn't explode. Well, it does in his dramatic poetry of the time of the poem, OTHELLO and KING LEAR. but in the poem he achieves an eerie calm and gravitas. The meaning of the poem is clear enough - it's a Platonic rather than sexual relationship he celebrates - It's the language that makes it so mysterious. As you can see, Sandra, I'm still an English teacher eleven years into retirement it's not over - I'm still teaching and preaching my favorite works of literature. Don't let me get started on Shakespeare's underappreciated tragedy ANTONY AND CLEOPATRA. You'll never hear the end of that tirade!
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  • Patricia Grantham (4/7/2015 9:29:00 AM)

    Very unique and quite beautiful Sandra.
    Touched my heart.
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  • Heather Wilkins (12/30/2014 8:32:00 PM)

    a lovely poem Sandra it is so nice to be queen for a day congratulations (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 10, 2014

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