Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


Lovely Rain! - Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

I hear your feeble voice from a distance,
Run towards you nervously in expectation,
Not so weak, but not so audible in expanse,
The loud cry for love and affection,
When you are happy, you dance and whistle.
When you are in good mood,
You spray the paint of kindness,
On our weak heart, that yearns,
But when you are worriedly sad,
Why do you slap us with violent thunder,
And drown us in your tears?


Comments about Lovely Rain! by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

  • (8/19/2012 2:23:00 AM)


    Rain is always welcome but as you say at times it drowns us in tears! Nice little poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Diane Hine (8/13/2012 8:16:00 AM)


    Mostly welcome but sometimes not- expressed in a unique original way. (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2012 1:00:00 AM)


    Good imagination, nicely worded! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012


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