Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 507,245 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Lovely Woman - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

She is very respectful
And in hr attempt successful too
I wonder how she could manage
But yes she has learned with passage of time

I look at her bright eyes
They really speaking live
She needs someone to observe
I saw her on line and decided to serve

There appears major concern
Like dark eclipse on full moon
She may be seized with unknown worry
As dark shadow appear under eyes to feel sorry

Face is beautifully carved
As if from marble and stayed
I am fully mesmerized at her show
No one can easily forgo

Even though highly qualified and placed
She has never race
From top to boot
You can find any fault seldom

Anybody on earth shall feel lucky
To be in close vicinity of naturally
It gives joy to be near caring woman
It adds fragrance and flavor as human

I took bid to compose
On a woman who was supposed
To be aloof and rowdy
But she has proved already


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015



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