Lovers Haiku Poem by Barry Middleton

Lovers Haiku



lovers by the lake
a silver moon is rising
the white egret soars

Lovers Haiku
Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 18 May 2017

This is lovely! I just got goosebumps, because I just wrote my first Haiku ever (on 17th May,2017) and then discovered YOURS here! Is this an omen of some sort? Naw, actually you beat me to it- - yours was written before mine was! Barry, I just progressed to Level 6! I am now officially a member of that exclusive club! And beyond thrilled (except that they say when you reach the top, ther's nowhere else to go- - except to just keep accumulating more points, I s'pose...) Anyway, hope life is treating you well!

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Barry Middleton 18 May 2017

Glad you like it. And welcome to the number 6 club. There are still many places to go beyond 6. A poet knows when he pens a winner whether anyone sees it or not.

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