Thursday, October 11, 2018

Lovers Quarrel Comments

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In her dreams you come running back
begging her to forgive you for what you lack
But your silence keeps her in the dark
is it not true that you carry on like a lark
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Aqua Flower
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2018

these lines baffle (me) a bit: If love survives, than where is she surely not in the arms of he...of course then, not than. right? RIGHT! AND he? ? not you or thee? ? are you speaking of one OR more than one man here? ? are you one of those jezebels? ? ! ! ! i knew 3 of them: my mom, sister, and grandmother (on Dad's side) . bri :) reluctantly, to MyPoemList.

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Aqua Flower 15 October 2018

Hi! I love how you dissect the bone piece by piece! You are right those lines are a little confusing. It's only one man with talking about here. Although it does sound like a love triangle. When I'm up a table I will definitely revisit the poem and edit. Thanks for reluctantly putting this on your poem nice it must have been painful LOL

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Aqua Flower 15 October 2018

Poem instead of bone...lol. And able instead of table... phone.....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2018

we all fight and it adds to often delight but who will be the first take up to rectify and right think twill be your delight might leave ego in the garbage bin of time alight AQUA be the mixing flower of all fighting lovers

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Aqua Flower 11 October 2018

Thank you for your cute and cleverly written reply. Haha...who will be the one to cave in and say sorry..hmmmmm.

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Bill Cantrell 11 October 2018

Sometimes getting in the last punch is more painful to the one hitting, either way.. lovers quarrels usually leaves no survivors, really good poem

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Aqua Flower 11 October 2018

I couldn't have said it any better...so true!

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Aqua Flower 11 October 2018

and thank you!

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