Loves Me Loves Me Not Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Loves Me Loves Me Not

Rating: 5.0


Loves me, loves me not
I keep on counting

Petals, one after one,
Wither, fall out

But I won't withdraw,
I won't stop
Asking, I would keep on
For this rose, much I trust,
It won't deceive

But never this onion,
I would ask
For on peeling,
It would bring only
Tearful layered lies!

Dec 15,2020

Tuesday, December 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: falsehood,love,love and dreams,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 30 December 2022

Lovely piece......enjoyed.....thank u...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2020

But I won't withdraw/I won't stop......I can imagine your tender feelings and feel your pulse! Beautiful.......5 stars

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