Friday, February 15, 2008

Loving Her Both Times Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch her
move about

now in brightness
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Elysabeth Faslund 29 February 2008

Lovely poem....the warmth of your heart is overwhelming.....now, about those e-mails I've been sending you? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Elysabeth....answer would be nice........................

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Gina Pisapia 17 February 2008

A simply beautiful poem. So tender in its loving...so knowing in its awareness...so gentle in its caring. Beautiful. love GianXXX

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Dee Dee Wright 16 February 2008

Donall this is such a...one of the most beautiful tender love poems that I know. I love it both times...forever. How you hold the sense of her and how you are aware of her in both past and present tenses...is just so touching. It made me cry and then I read it again and it made me cry. For a poem that made me cry so much I really love and I will probably cry again when I next read it. The end is really beautiful...really beautiful. love Dee Dee

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Scarlett Treat 15 February 2008

Donall, this is, bar none, one of the most tender love poems I have ever read, for, to my way of thinking, it covers it all, and the transitional phrases...of turning the marvelous colored picture of her into a black and white photo, and into the white hair with its halo....is just perfect. One of your best ever, I believe! You really DO know what love is, don't you? ?

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Zimkitha Mpatheni 15 February 2008

if love is what you have wrote here then i wish it upon everyone's life.truelly magical

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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