Michael Walkerjohn

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Loving Memories

Poem by Michael Walkerjohn

I am
too much
in pain within
your loving' memories…
so helpless the memories too
of me, of you, of loving's thrillingly
embossed hue of friendships gold and lust'
shivering and fulfilling passionate midnight's
trust and truth; here these words are too
these memories never attempting to go
away from U... run to My Love
you do Love
Me To I...

Topic(s) of this poem: memories


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Inspired by the words of our Megha

Comments about Loving Memories by Michael Walkerjohn

  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (4/26/2020 11:41:00 PM)

    Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions.(Report)Reply

    Michael WalkerjohnMichael Walkerjohn(4/29/2020 1:45:00 AM)

    Aloha Chinedu... and Cheers! Something about reality shared over a few decades... and this... my fifth marriage... I must have remembered a bit about the gender differences on thinking, feeling and that phuucking emotional thingy... gotta fully love a great woman though... and all my ex' ain't living in Texas! Thanks for the very concise and honest read on this prose... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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  • Harindhar Reddy (4/16/2020 5:44:00 AM)

    Something we feel the pain with memories loved ones. Yup it's true love begets love. Feelings are reflective and effective. Friendships sometimes last long leaving in the lane of our memorable memory. Well said dear bard walkerjohn, you can walk with accolades if you jot down poetry like this. Hope you can hear my loud cheers!(Report)Reply

    Michael WalkerjohnMichael Walkerjohn(4/29/2020 1:52:00 AM)

    Aloha Harindhar... and Cheers Mate... In and out... of the english levels... Ummmmmm... IAM not at all familiar with a stroll as an accolade... An accolite maybe or an accoluī, Whatever! Language is not truly necessarily needed to commune... Ohm... Yea... and your applause is welcomed by the song birds feeding off my table scraps... In a most positive intention of course... Who else but me to feed them? All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (11/20/2018 12:25:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem here is the translation in Hindi:
    प्यारी यादें

    मैं
    आपकी यादों में
    अत्यधिक दर्द में डूबा हूँ
    और कितनी असहाय हैं ये यादें
    मेरी, तुम्हारी और उन रोमांचिक लम्हो की
    की जब हम दोस्ती और प्रेम में खोये थे
    रात की कम्पन में एक दूजे की बाँहों में लिपटे
    विश्वास और सत्य में पिरोयी इन यादों में
    न तुम से कहीं दूर
    और मैं भी कहाँ हूँ इनसे दूर.(Report)Reply

    Michael WalkerjohnMichael Walkerjohn(2/6/2019 2:21:00 AM)

    Aloha Mohammed...
    Cheers My Brother and my most humble apology for not catching this beautifully rendition you have made of these true and simple words of mine... I profoundly thank you for this work of yours... Please do make an attempt to contact me... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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  • Luz HanaiiLuz Hanaii (11/11/2018 11:55:00 PM)

    This is the translation to your poem in Spanish;

    Memorias Amorosas

    Yo estoy
    en mucho
    dolor dentro de mi
    tus memorias de amor...
    tan inpotentes las memorias tambien
    de mi, de ti, de amar es emocionante
    tono embocado de amistades oro y lujuria
    temblando y satisfaciendo medias noches pasionales
    confianza y verdad; aqui estas palabras tambien
    estas memorias nunca trataran de irse
    de ti... corre a Mi Amor
    tu si Amas
    Mi A Yo...(Report)Reply

    Michaelw1two(11/12/2018 1:39:00 AM)

    Aloha Luz...
    My most profound and heart felt thanks for making this post possible... YOU, have made my daze brighter! Have fun translating any piece you deem important... I realize that you do have your own reality to enjoy... so just remember... I, will be watching over you... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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  • Luz HanaiiLuz Hanaii (10/26/2018 12:48:00 AM)

    Aw! muy romantico, great stuff.(Report)Reply

    Luz Hanaii(10/28/2018 9:20:00 PM)

    Hi Michael,
    I'll translate it in Spanish when I get back from my trip.

    Michael WalkerjohnMichael Walkerjohn(10/27/2018 2:22:00 AM)

    Aloha Luz...
    Not bad for an old dirt carpenter... Say... how about you translating this here ditty into the language of your long past relations... how about 500 years ago... in that language... the language that our creator gave your peoples... Maybe? Give it a go... and send me a copy by pm... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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  • S.zaynab KamoonpuriS.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/24/2015 12:48:00 AM)

    A winsome memories poem written in romantic freeverse! Thumbs up poet!
    Nice to read u again!(Report)Reply

    Michael WalkerjohnMichael Walkerjohn(5/24/2016 4:52:00 AM)

    Aloha S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri...

    Whoa! IAm a true derelict! How could I not have answered this way too kind comment? Oh... I was working 7 / 10 / 365... High-rise structural concrete... in the downtown of L.A. My most humble apologies... and I profoundly thank you for having a lookin and a read... and for these lovely comments... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 24, 2015