Loyalty Poem by alicia tschantre

Loyalty

Rating: 5.0


Went a little crazy when me and my ex split.
i started livin life like I had a death wish.
most you men shady and no im not bein sexist.
cross me once, then ya mind ima mess with,
cross me twice then ya life i be exiten.
You decide but loyalty is somethin you prove in time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josiah Decker 04 December 2012

I love this poem. It has a creepy, in your face vibe I love to read.

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Connor Whyte 04 December 2012

Things don't always work but its the way we handle it that proves if your a better person. Loyalty is a hard thing for most guys but I see a lot of dis loyalty between both parts. Good choice in words a few misspelled words but no one is perfect I have plenty of poems with some errors in it but its what makes it what it is and this is a good poem.

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