Neran Sati

Lucky Whisper - Poem by Neran Sati

Noon pondering, summer inn..
Success to achieve, what does it mean?
Money, fame or sailing over sea?
Zephyr's whisper in my ear

It's all about - getting free!

Topic(s) of this poem: freedom, success

Form: Imagery

Comments about Lucky Whisper by Neran Sati

  • Liza Sudina (10/14/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    Free from useless passions and grief! that's what we really need! lovely! (Report) Reply

    (10/14/2015 6:28:00 AM)

    I agree Lisa, what one should be striving for - tough general subject, yet at core of individual freedom!
    Thanks so much for this comment!

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  • Kelly Kurt (9/18/2015 4:56:00 PM)

    Freeing one's self, physically, mentally and spiritually from the entrapments of society. Nicely penned, Neran (Report) Reply

    (9/18/2015 5:46:00 PM)

    And from one's ego, too! Thanks for your remark, Kelly

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 10, 2016

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