poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Luminous Star Gone

Luminous star gone

Michael Jackson, truly beloved son,
You are no more among us as person,
History will honour you and vacuumed felt,
Bowed head with respect and ice melt,

It was rising from the grave with full energy,
Society had nothing to offer but only bogey,
No cloths left but only white coffer,

May mark him as one of the greatest,
New pattern with songs newest,
Each with message of love and peace,
As good morning with cool breeze,

You served and loved as human being,
Shrouded with mystery but honest living,
Nothing is remembered bad or good,
Music was life and energy as food,

You survived as king of kings,
Melodies chorus with beautiful sing,
Crowned with jewel and diamond,
World was fascinating and almost fond,

I salute to soul, who suffered a lot,
Offered a treasure hidden in pot,
Soul departed with great pain,
Died with honour but not as martyrs slain

Poem Submitted: Friday, June 26, 2009

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  • Reshma Punjabi (10/21/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    Michael Jackson, truly beloved son,
    You are no more among us as person,
    History will honour you and vacuumed felt,

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  • Sachin Goswami (10/19/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    Michael Jackson, truly beloved son,
    You are no more among us as person,
    History will honour you and vacuumed felt

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  • Twinkle Vohra (10/11/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    History will honour you and vacuumed felt,
    Bowed head with respect and ice melt,

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  • Poetic Soul (10/5/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    Such a rich poem to the king of pop, Michael is such a historic icon to music history. What u expressed here was your feelings for him. And there's so much he's done as an artist that no else can. I appreciate your poem,10/10

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  • Lalvani Rekha (9/16/2009 11:36:00 PM)

    salute to soul, who suffered a lot,
    Offered a treasure hidden in pot,
    Soul departed with great pain,
    Died with honour but not as martyrs slain

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  • Sulochna Pandit (8/16/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    has gone fo rever fromus....10

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  • Raju Rajput (8/16/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    onelegendry figure has disappeared....10

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  • Maulin Shah (8/13/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    star afaded away once for all...10

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  • Kunwar Patel (8/12/2009 12:28:00 PM)

    left for heavenly abode....10

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  • Radha Seth (8/12/2009 11:51:00 AM)

    he has departed for ever....10

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  • Saroj Davde (8/12/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    he has departed from earth for ever....10

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  • Kamli Kamal (8/11/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    star has disappeared among us....10

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  • Ratna Patel (8/11/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    luminous stars has gone from the earth....10

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  • Santoksingh Jadeja (8/10/2009 10:05:00 PM)

    great star no more with us....10

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  • Shilpa Maheswari (8/10/2009 9:54:00 PM)

    good bye jackson and we will miss u....10

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  • Vinod Karmakar (8/9/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    luminous star has gone from earth..10

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  • Suresh Vakil (8/7/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    great star is now diminished....10

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  • Rupa Shah (8/6/2009 10:25:00 PM)

    star has gone before time....10

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  • Durga Sethani (8/6/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    star is more among us....10

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  • Chaul Vania (8/6/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    star disappear for ever from us....10

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