Lust Poem by Emu Getachew

Lust

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It's like a loud gale...
scorching hundred miles an hour
leaving bruises at the brim of mother-earth
it never stops be it twelve noon or midnight
but knows how to growl and wreck my high.

© Emu Getachew November 4,2009

Wednesday, November 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: november,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Amazing with into the perfect octave and octet of emotional orchestration ‘Lust is timeless Lust is boundless Lust is never tasteless Lust is moralless’ ~ niv PS I mean injudicious lust 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Eyan Desir 09 December 2009

Well written poem.....

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Kesav Easwaran 06 November 2009

'leaving bruises at the brim of mother-earth'... this line is suggestively imaginative...nice write, Emu...thanks...10 read my piece - Love And Lust...a simple one it relates

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James Mclain 04 November 2009

He is but the pole.. that shows the harbors.. gate... and stands.. before each storm...iip

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