Lust Flows As Naturally As Sweat Comments

Excellent poem, Uriah. Fresh, raw, real. Very well done. Hugs to you, CJ

Simple in its fleshy complexity - well done!

What a wonderful poem Uriah. You really put us there with them........you make their 'forbidden passion' so apparent. Great job as usual. :) Sincerely, Mary

Good poem, Uriah, but I shiver when I think about the women who are killed by their own families for just such an offense. Raynette

uriah, this is a real good one.