Saturday, June 4, 2005

Magical Saturday Afternoon Comments

Rating: 4.8

I want to kiss your arms
On a park bench in the sunlight,
They’d be sweet and warm,
Life would begin to feel right.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 09 February 2007

A very dreamy poem...and what a lovely day dream it is. Hugs. Dee

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Idyllic. Magical and serene, indeed. These simple pleasures in life are the all-important ones; the company is the decisive factor. You write marvellously. t x

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Anong All 04 June 2005

Your poem is lovely. It paints a very calming picture within the mind.

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