Her name is Girl before she becomes a woman
And she already became a maidservant with her precious children.
The partner goes out, fulfill their desires
And nobody calls again by her previous name.
Her life seems to be a *maiden over with all the hardships.
*[ An over in cricket with no runs scored]
Something a bit poignant about this one. An interesting play on words. Fine work, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra
A witty little epigram. Clever penning Nimal. love, Allie xxxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A delicious use of the cricketing term. Wit twinkles from your words. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥