A Blind Gypsy And His Piccolo Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Blind Gypsy And His Piccolo

Rating: 3.3

He pitches a higher octave the inner song of desperation
While his fiancee on picnicking with her violin.
She fiddles to another heart a different tune
And the blind sees her secret whereabouts.

* I love you and hope you love me
I kept my promise, don't keep your distance.
-Evita, Don't cry for me Argentina-

Sandra Fowler 31 October 2007

Two souls out of tune with each other. This is very sad. Life can be very unfair. Fine penning, Nimal. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 June 2010

Fiddle and flute will be in synchrony and synergy hope so…melancholy will be élan …euphony nears the distance… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Philip Winchester 22 November 2009

Nice Subtle verse from a Master Poet, I acknowledge with respect. Philip

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Sonya Florentino 03 March 2009

hmmm interesting, does the piccolo symbolise something?

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Alison Cassidy 03 November 2007

Nimal this is very sad - and penned with sensitivity and musicality. Your image of blind betrayal is poignantly drawn. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 31 October 2007

To be able to read what another feels through there expression of music Wow, what a tallent Another great piece from you Nimal All the best Love duncan X

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nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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