nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Blind Gypsy And His Piccolo - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

He pitches a higher octave the inner song of desperation
While his fiancee on picnicking with her violin.
She fiddles to another heart a different tune
And the blind sees her secret whereabouts.


* I love you and hope you love me
I kept my promise, don't keep your distance.
-Evita, Don't cry for me Argentina-


Comments about A Blind Gypsy And His Piccolo by nimal dunuhinga

  • (6/29/2010 2:30:00 AM)


    Fiddle and flute will be in synchrony and synergy hope so…melancholy will be élan …euphony nears the distance… thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (11/22/2009 5:06:00 AM)


    Nice Subtle verse from a Master Poet,
    I acknowledge with respect.
    Philip
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  • (3/3/2009 6:54:00 AM)


    hmmm interesting, does the piccolo symbolise something? (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2007 12:46:00 AM)


    Nimal this is very sad - and penned with sensitivity and musicality. Your image of blind betrayal is poignantly drawn. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2007 12:52:00 PM)


    To be able to read what another feels through there expression of music
    Wow, what a tallent
    Another great piece from you Nimal
    All the best
    Love duncan X
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  • (10/31/2007 7:15:00 AM)


    Two souls out of tune with each other. This is very sad. Life can be very unfair. Fine penning, Nimal.

    Always your friend at poemhunter,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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