A Bluestocking And A Lilliput Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Bluestocking And A Lilliput

Rating: 3.1


We are not seeing each other
but we exchange what they call poetry.
Madam you are far beyond the vicinity.
I am an old bachelor stick around
longing for something which I cannot express.
Do you find in my poems?
We are only two parallel lines
in the song of love.


to Amanda Lukas.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 17 December 2009

An amusing title. I appreciate the originiality of thought and your clever way of expressing the meeting of these two.

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Sandra Fowler 20 September 2008

Excellent last lines. One of your more eloquent efforts. As always, Sandra

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joey oo 30 September 2006

Nimal, I think our poetry says something about us, and yes some of us run in parallel lines, but with some, our paths cross, and there is a definite affinity... you have a lovely way of expressing yourself... Take care. Joey

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Melvina Germain 25 August 2006

Another (10) from me Nimal, thankyou-----Melvina

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Roy Storey 08 April 2006

It was worth 10 for the smile, Take care Roy.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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