Make It Point Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Make It Point

Rating: 5.0


Make it point and not to have
Wordy dual when in real love
Use of language that is sweet
Always smile when time affords to greet

Love may want some sacrifice
Some more words with promises
With enough of assurances
So do not let it slip away as chance

River is in spate
Yet do not spare banks when state
Her presence with force
It is love of course

Allow clouds to clash
Make them move in rash drive
It may strike and end in showers
The seeds may turn into flowers

It is love only that needs no separation
But solid relation with foundation
It may have no physical indication
But try to understand it with satisfaction

Love may turn desolate land
Into fertile one with positive trend
It shall show prosperity with happiness
The good scene with cheers on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Make it point and not to have Wordy dual when in real love

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Like 8 minutes ago by nutshellgmw1.. to Make it point

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

welcome Gibz Rising, like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

This is Great Steven Gerring13 minutes ago Great poem of love ;) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Great! Shamus NA15 minutes ago I love this poem! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

its very good joe abril15 minutes ago i like it, its very good keep writing

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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