Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 743,261 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Makes Me Bleed - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It makes me bleed and hurts most
Irreparable loss though nothing lost
It may not be material loss or damage
Makes you unseat and difficult to manage

Why to distrust and cast a doubt?
Why sudden loss of face and turn about?
Is there any secret understanding or clout?
Why sudden loss of battle and rout?

It pains and hurts my conscience
I must go into oblivion with silence
Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy
Why life turns so hostile with such comedy?

I will not stand up and face the weather
Neither I will cry or continuously bother
May consider it as set back and differ with
Opinion of others but not suffer

It gave me enough of strength and joy
Full of real sense and simple tactics employ
Nothing so particular or malice intention
Still it stood as test and raised question

I must search the soul and repent
No to further quest and consent
Confine to realm with utmost sincerity
Steady pace and no more hostility

I should go down with human dignity
Love to live with simple natural beauty
Who is there on earth without any blame?
Can any one remain aloof and claim?

I too would live with no malign intent
Avoid unpleasant scne and remain content
God is so kind to grant us whatever we desire
Why then we hesitate and not even admire?


Comments about Makes Me Bleed by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (1/28/2010 9:49:00 PM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
    Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy
    Why life turns so hostile with such comedy?

    this is strong point in words i love it
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  • (10/14/2009 3:07:00 PM)

    that's true God is kind to give us whatever we desire (Report)Reply

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  • (10/10/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    Is there any secret understanding or clout?
    Why sudden loss of battle and rout?
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  • (10/10/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    Why to distrust and cast a doubt?
    Why sudden loss of face and turn about?
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  • (10/10/2009 9:45:00 PM)

    I must search the soul and repent
    No to further quest and consent
    Confine to realm with utmost sincerity
    Steady pace and no more hostility
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  • (10/10/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    It makes me bleed and hurts most
    Irreparable loss though nothing lost
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  • (10/10/2009 9:12:00 AM)

    It makes me bleed and hurts most
    Irreparable loss though nothing lost
    It may not be material loss or damage
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  • (10/10/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    It makes me bleed and hurts most
    Irreparable loss though nothing lost
    It may not be material loss or damage
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  • (10/9/2009 10:38:00 PM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
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  • (10/9/2009 9:54:00 PM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
    Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy
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  • (10/9/2009 7:50:00 PM)

    will not stand up and face the weather
    Neither I will cry or continuously bother
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  • (10/9/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    Why to distrust and cast a doubt?
    Why sudden loss of face and turn about?
    Is there any secret understanding or clout?
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  • (10/9/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
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  • (10/8/2009 1:16:00 PM)

    An inward-looking poem…despite the external odds…with an urge and endeavour for equipoise and sangfroid…which is so essential for a life of meaning. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    Why to distrust and cast a doubt?
    Why sudden loss of face and turn about?
    Is there any secret understanding or clout
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  • (10/7/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
    Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy
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  • (10/7/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    will not stand up and face the weather
    Neither I will cry or continuously bother
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  • (10/7/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    Why to distrust and cast a doubt?
    Why sudden loss of face and turn about?
    Is there any secret understanding or clout?
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  • (10/7/2009 11:50:00 AM)

    I am in love the word usage and vocabulary you have. The way the words flow across the screen, the way they sound musical. Great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2009 11:34:00 AM)

    It pains and hurts my conscience
    I must go into oblivion with silence
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 2, 2009


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