Makeshift Daddy Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Makeshift Daddy

Rating: 5.0


She wraps her legs
around my neck

pulls on the reins
of my ears and curls

when she wants me
to giddy up or stop.

She screams: 'Daddy Daddy! '
and excitedly wee wees down
the back of my neck,

A happy little girl
happy that I am her Daddy
...even just for now.

'You're my pretend Daddy
'cos my real Daddy's gone away

to be dead
in Heaven.'

She tells me that one day
she will visit him in Heaven

but she will '...have to wait
until she's grown up dead.'

'But...' (she carefully
assesses the situation)

'...you'll do
for the time being! '


(for Lyn)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Dee Wright 27 September 2007

There's nothing makeshift about you...you're the real thing. Very tender and touching. Love the realness of the weeing down your neck! One of the occupational hazzards of looking after young kids. Love also that your curls and ears are riens...hillarious! Giddyup Daddy Donall Donall! Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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