Tiku akp


Making Love - Poem by Tiku akp

I am not with me now
Your beauty has kept me charmed
Waiting to feel your bosoms
I like to get bruised and deeply harmed

Kill me with your look
Don't say kind words into my ears
Let my lips get rubbed
Against your thighs till you spill tears

Between your full breasts
I will lay my head to sing and dream
My love lies at the edge of
Your belly, push me with your whim

I am born to live in you
To sip honey from your fleshy pot
Let your moans rise high
With your tight veins you are getting hot

Topic(s) of this poem: love, passion


Comments about Making Love by Tiku akp

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (7/1/2017 3:52:00 PM)

    I am born to live in you
    To sip honey from your fleshy pot
    Let your moans rise high
    With your tight veins you are getting hot.. deep feeling. It is a beautiful poem on love and passion with nice articulation. Thanks for sharing.
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    Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda(7/2/2017 2:14:00 AM)

    Thanks Sir for giving your valuable time to my poetry. Regards.

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (7/1/2017 11:36:00 AM)

    your poem speaks of visual exoticity
    in a world seeking real ecstasy
    and
    your poetry is electric..
    at best
    adultish
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    Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda(7/2/2017 2:11:00 AM)

    Thank you very much my dear friend for support. Much love.

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  • Luis Estable (7/1/2017 9:02:00 AM)

    The language here is very telling. There is no doubt about what the words try to say.
    There is hot passion in this and I like the selection of phrases in this. Well done!

    At times I like this kind of wriitng where one lets lose and leaves it up to the reader to enjoy the picture.
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    Thanks and keep on wrriting. I liked what you had to say in the poem.

    Luis Estable
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    Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda(7/2/2017 2:08:00 AM)

    My humble thanks and gratitude Sir

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 1, 2017



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