Marquee3 Iloveyou! 3 /Marquee Poem by Geovanni Leaño

Marquee3 Iloveyou! 3 /Marquee

Rating: 4.3


Here's a BLUE

.......................................................................................
................UOYEVO..........OVEYOU............................
.............! ....................L...L...................! .......................
...........I..........................I..........................I.......................
..........L....................................................L.....................
...........O...................BLUE...................O......................
.............V............................................V.........................
.................E......................................E...........................
.......................Y............................Y................................
...........................O....................O...................................
................................U..........U.........by: .........................
.......................................! ...................Lex_Potent.......


I know for you my dear it's enough...
But I still don't know when it'll end...
probabbly never... I love you!
you know it's true...

This art I made isn't just enough...
to show you how much i love you...
The heart isn't the point...
But what's in the inside...

-GanNi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Hughff 17 April 2008

It's always nice to read something passionate, especially when its in the shape of a heart. Well done

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Andrew Blakemore 17 April 2008

Well done Geovanni, I liked this a lot. Andrew

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Alex Rios 17 April 2008

I love it GanNi! It was the cutest poem! ! ! Your BFF, -Panda

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 April 2008

Geovanni, I salute how brave you are to express your love so freely...'Poetry is not knowing, but feeling; although there may be wisdom in the poem, it must be felt, not merely understood...' this quote was said by Paul Engle at a conference on teaching creative writing given at Library of Congress in 1973...I live by this when I write. He also said...'The power of poetry is to make art out of plain and brutal words.' Remember...The Language of poetry is precise, concise, charged with feeling. I realize you did not ask for a lecture but wanted to share with you some thoughts of wisdom once passed on to me. Dorothy

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Paul Butters 17 April 2008

Sheesh, you can't get much more creative than this. Will Blue turn red I ask myself. Good stuff. Paul.

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Serenity Prayer 31 August 2008

very sweet and creative. great job.

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

You are certainly unique. Love the change. Poem romantic and sweet

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Richa Dhodi 11 May 2008

awesome work........... i love the pattern.. keep going

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Crystal Garcia 24 April 2008

aww! how sweet! ! kool! !

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Amie-Lee ...... 21 April 2008

Wow, I absolutly love the way you shape the letters like a love-heart

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