*the Kid Who Learned To Write Poem by Geovanni Leaño

*the Kid Who Learned To Write

Rating: 3.1


I was passing by the school's locker
Until I saw this paper on the floor,
I picked it up and was amazed by what's inside...
In a broken pattern It said:

'wan turite da bes leters por you,
Aymey bi jus sumwon,
samwon whu siting bak op you,
bat aya dor you,
ayheb dis filin me groaweeng
graweeng jaspor you,
you onli en onli you.'

Then I learned that it was from a seven year old kid,
This boy was exactly just like me,
But even though this feeling is just a kid's love,
I know, even a kid can love far more than Romeo and Juliet ^_^
Maybe one day, he too will experience this.
Maybe, I've met the next Romeo finding Juliet in the making...
This kid's got something,
He may be too bad at spelling words,
He may have the craziest grammar,
But one thing is certain - he can spell YOU correctly...

;)

*Dedicated to me while I was a kid...*
-GanNi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

I love it. Dramatic and interesting. Well done

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Ryan Camansa 14 July 2008

Fantastic toh! I can feel the emotion

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Cheung Shun Sang 20 May 2008

Beautiful done. very good poem. i give 10 stars

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Marvin Brato 20 May 2008

A true poet writes from the heart to express innate emotions that overrides the mind! High marks.

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

Zamboanga City
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