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i used to know John 3: 16 by heart; not the rest.... it is commendable that you are (i guess) trying to save souls. this poem is a VERY unique way to try it. sorry, it won't work on me, a fallen, wayward sheep. BUT I really enjoyed the poem. so well-written and clever, THOUGH the fact that i didn't know until the end who the speaker was......threw me off from understanding a spot or two at first. NOW i know why you wrote Here IN the earth instead of On the earth. the poem does take a serious turn when it goes from a devil who is tempting to one who is warning. is the devil maybe feeling badly about his fall from grace? thanks for sharing. :) you may (or not) find something entertaining in my poem which is along similar lines as yours: 146 Rich Man Vs. Ghost....[Religion; Humor] online 8/24/2012 thanks for sharing. :) oops! i wrote that already!