May Poem by Rebecca Navarre

May

Rating: 5.0


May that flame, always
flicker, and dance so bright.
On those tender, sentimental,
nights. May the music play...
And, The love inside stay...

Sunday, March 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 18 April 2017

You use the word M-A-Y in a double sense. In the title it's the lovely month, thr height of spring. but in the poem it is the helping verb m-a-y which indicates hope something you seem good will happen. You want spring to be a flame after dark winter, you want the season to be filled with dance which brings people into harmony, like Keats you want to say TENDER IS THE NIGHT (!) and as Shakespeare's FOOD OF LOVE, namely music plays, you want love to be faithful and fill our lives which its presence. Okay, angels, carry Rebecca's requests up to Heaven and bring their fulfillment down to Earth! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 20 April 2017

Thank You! ! ! Daniel, You Have A Very Kind Heart! ! ! ! ! That Reflects And Shows In Your Wonderfully Beautiful Poems! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2017

Still I have wished to revisit this poem due to beauty of expression. A single word, may, expresses very deep thought. The flame of flicker and the glowing light of love unite to give complete theme of life.10

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Rebecca Navarre 04 April 2017

Thank You! ! ! Again Kumarmani, You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! And Your Poetry Is So Very Beautifully Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2017

Beautiful poem with hope. Amusing expression. Thanks for sharing...10

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2017

Thank You! ! ! ! ! Kumarmani, Your Comments Are Appreciated! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Magnificently And Beautifully Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Wishing You Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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