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Rating: 4.9

Hanging out with the girls next door,
Oh, what troubles we found galore. When
Warnings were ignored.And as we got bored,
drinking was explored. Listening to wrong,
it never dawned. We'd make the boys sore.
Wings got tore. Booze was continually in
store. Till games ended in one on the floor.
When poured in large sum. While finding
others had none. Stripped down to the pore.
Friendships were no more. Seeking solace

and comfort, for sores. Tried other shores.
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Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,horror,true,youth

A moving story imbued with a great lesson in life. A meaningful and uplifting write.

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kyvin nash 07 April 2021

This is very familiar, experiences of youth...been there, Im glad you shared yours...its good you came out of this alive, very truthful poem!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 April 2021

I guess you survived is why you wrote this lovely poem. Been there done that a few scars from bars to show.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2021

A thought-provoking poem about youth and friendship.Very attentively worded.5 Stars Full! A true fsacinating poem, Becca!

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Robert Murray Smith 20 December 2020

Alcohol to excess creates a mess. Happy Xmas and New Year, Rebecca.

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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Rebecca.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2019

Thank you! .. Chinedu, God bless! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 February 2019

The rest of my life, I've implored.To our Lord, my sins to remove, From the core.....earnest prayer! An adorable piece of poetry......10

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2019

Thank you! .. Dr. Dillip, For your very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry is filled with such inspirational beauty, that's ever so powerful, and moving! .. Thank you! .. And I look forward to reading more! ..God bless! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 24 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Howard, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Beautiful, Deep And Strong! ! ! ! ! Flows Ever So Beautifully Like A Song! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rich in a realism that is both robust and redemptive!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

A poem of substance: scintillating expression with little touch of horror................And as we got bored, drinking was explored....! Excellent ending...Liked the rhythm and rhyme..Extremely well penned....! Happy New Year 2018

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