May We Always Be Poem by Jamal Brown

May We Always Be

Rating: 4.0


The last time I saw you we were saying goodbye.
We hugged, we kissed, I looked into your eyes.
I fought back my tears like I have for all theese years.
Hell had unleished all of my fears.


Now we're standing here hand in hand,
And girl I promise You that I'm a better man.
But now that's history.
I'm replacing the old with the new,
There is nothing in the world I wouldn't
give just to hold you.

You make me laugh,
you're the reason I breathe.
So, this is way I'm on my knees.
Will you give me this special honor
And be my wife.
I can promise you contentment for the
rest of your life.

Jehovah sent you from heaven above,
and may you always be my love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this poem is well written, i could feel your emotions in your words, i could feel your pain. your poem couldkinda paint a picture in muy mind of you and your lover saying goodbye. Goodbye means forever and i think that you shud never let her go, never give up and say goodbye. She may say it, bu if you lover her like your amazing words say, you Will Not give i n and say goodbye, for she is your love, your true love, your bride to be, your amazing half! :) this is just an anazing poem and just wanted to give you a tip. :)

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 24 February 2012

Nice writeup...i also like the title..may we always be...kudos. Please u shud read my poem...my emotions betray me and A lullaby..thanks for sharing...+

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