Kong Yin


Maybe - Poem by Kong Yin

Stars glimmering in a stream,
moon flickering on a far mountain,
bamboo leaves rustling,
dogs barking,
withered vines reaching out,
endlessly, a road stretching.

On a blue path of flagstone,
petals chasing a puff of breeze,
she all in grey, holding her alms,
knocks on doors, begging in shadows.

That person might be me.
There I may have been.

Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Maybe by Kong Yin

  • Kathy Van Kurin (3/2/2017 3:38:00 PM)


    Kong Yin,
    A dream of images full of meaning. The small things can mean so much. Dogs barking gave it a feeling activity and somehow a moving feeling in the air. The path of flagstone depicted that a person's soul or heart was searching - she, all in grey.................maybe seeking meaning.................great ending begging in shadows......I enjoyed Maybe very much. May I ask how this poem came to be? Blessings to you in your life and writing.....................Kathy
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  • Kewayne Wadley (12/7/2015 2:19:00 PM)


    Very tranquil! Real dream like.
    KW
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/7/2015 12:17:00 PM)


    Stars are glimmering in a stream wonderfully with expressive emotion and moon is flickering on a far mountain. What an interesting imagery is drawn here in this marvelous poem really. Nicely penned.....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015



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