Me And I Poem by Peter S. Quinn

Me And I



Me and I we need it all now
What we had lost was never found
Try to find out what it's somehow
Before it’s gone nowhere around
This is the beginning of the end
Nothing to try only to get lost
With every making you comprehend
That it is getting crisscrossed

Living isn’t easy when it's gone
Raising to nowhere on to the dark
Carry those shoulders on and on
Until day from a new will spark
Those are empty from their going
On to badlands of days and night
Feeling bewilderment on growing
Nothing now comes that's alright

Me and my heart for its own sake
Trying to raise the beat more
Giving and showing being awake
Trying to think what it's all for
You and your starlight isn't to be
Because it’s gone with its load
So become for real what you see
To go along strong on to the road

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 December 2008

Your poem reminds me a true story.....Once a young divine seeker went to the hut of a hermit and knocked. The sage from inside shouted 'Who are u'. The boy replied 'I'm so and so'. Then the saint shouted again 'You have no place here'. Disappointed the boy left, only to return the next day. Again knocked the door and the saint shouted 'Who are u'. The boy this time gave more details about him, like his father, mother, place, properties etc. The saint shouted back, 'Go away! You have no place here'. The boy went away and spent a week time pondering over this. After a week her returned and again knocked the door of the saint. As usual the saint shouted 'Who are u'. The boy replied 'I CAME HERE TO KNOW THAT' The saint came out opened the door and said 'YOU ARE WELCOME'.

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