Me Or You! Poem by fatemeh zolfagharian

Me Or You!

Rating: 5.0


You were!
And before you
The sun shone for the first time
From the sheer darkness
To the light,
To define the 'day' for the timeline!
And
Before the 'day' it was 'today'
Which clinched its moments
To repeat you again
And engrave the present
Among the fragrance of the buds
That, they are in bloom widely
Just before you open your eyes
To appear the first color in the universe
Pristine and unrepeatable!
Opulent stars
Fulfilled the dusk, didn't incline to say goodbye
Waiting for me to come, to visit 'you'
So ' love' dawns for the first time
But 'me' before visits 'you'
Have to meet another one
Until flown
By pure love
By Purity
And refine my heart
I have to meet 'me'
To let 'me' come!
But, I have no idea
How long will it last?
How many days?
How many suns?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 12 July 2022

Wow---It is an amazing poem with great depth!

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thanks dear Bharati.

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Bharati Nayak 12 July 2022

Let me quote-But 'me' before visits 'you' Have to meet another one Until flown By pure love By Purity And refine my heart I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come! But, I have no idea How long will it last? How many days? How many suns?

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 August 2022

An insightful poem of great beauty.

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fatemeh zolfagharian 13 July 2022

thanks, Unnikrishnan, your comments are more brilliant than my poem, you got the point delicately

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Lovely writing. Sequential build-up to the dawn of love, "for the first time" in the universe… but, "I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come" to you. Realisation of self is most important before reaching out to the outer world. Even in love!

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Beautiful poem. Full of energy. Top score. And to Myfavourites

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Lovely writing. Sequential build-up to the dawn of love, "for the first time" in the universe… but, "I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come" to you. Realisation of self is most important before reaching out to the outer world. Even in love!

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