Leave All Things Poem by fatemeh zolfagharian

Leave All Things

Rating: 5.0


perching birds
on trees

vis a vis
little bees

dancing leaves
among breeze

golden rose
in green sheets

drunk waves
on the seas

are resonating
the mysteries
smile
dance
flow
release

breathe, my friend
leave all things!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Okim Otu 27 June 2022

I like the rhym in the beginning of the poem.

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Thanks

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Thanks a lot

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Beautiful poem of a pair of watchful eyes. Loved it.5 *s

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Michael Cochrane 26 June 2022

Very good

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"Breath, my friend, / leave all things"… loved reading it on this revisit

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hassan hayati 20 December 2022

simple and nice

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Rob Lamberton 18 December 2022

…breathe, my friend. I like it! ! !

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Mamata Bhatt 09 July 2022

Wow I got lost in imageries. Great poem.

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Miss Grace 05 July 2022

The rhyming scheme is so well written. The poem is indeed very beautiful

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