Circle Poem by fatemeh zolfagharian
Circle
time!
is a conflicting meeting
between two close
yet, stranger friends
Death and life
life!
Is a delicate petal
That annotated with time
to have room for the flight
Of a little moth
Moth!
An explicit sign
Of the deepest life
while more brief than
to meet a birthday dawn
Dawn!
Is a conflicting meeting
Between two close
Yet, stranger friends
Day and night.
" Dawn! Is a conflicting meeting Between two close Yet stranger friends Day and night." Admirable! Top score and myfav
Wonderful poem that moves smoothly like a circle that begins with time - then life like a delicate petal...a little Moth....a new dawn...a mixture of day and night.
A wonderful poem --a circle of time ---Birth and death ---Day and night make a full circle---in between lies life.Excellently expressed.
Extraordinarily excellent....beautiful flow of words....very intelligent write....top score
Loved the flow of the poem, poetess Fatemeh.......enjoyed reading......10
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5/4/2024 2:41:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Excellent poem. The definitions of time, life, moth and dawn, developed one after the other, make excellent craft.