Me The River-First Steps Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

Me The River-First Steps

Rating: 5.0


I was born in a rocky hill
Rather a cave, low lights.
When I was in the womb
I heard my mother singing
Lullabies, passionate, loving.


I heard her, talking me again
And again not to kick her
Be soft my dear, be soft.


I listened to her dreams
Her expectations, complaints
Her passions, love, everything.
Her heartbeat was the rhythm
Opened my eyes to the world.

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I was so helpless within,
Cant move without her help
I sucked her, the blissful nectar
Gave me, life and growth forever.


Jiggling, smiling swaying, falling
Stumbling, sitting, finally standing.
I made my way to my little steps
Mother earth was always perfect
Together with father nature, caring
Me beyond all the expectations.

Friday, August 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: expectations
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
prasanna 18 November 2020

The personification of the river and self Is superb

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Marvellous poem with beautiful imageries. The birth of stream has so emotionally been described. deserves more than the top marks

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Susan Williams 03 September 2020

When I was in the womb I heard my mother singing Lullabies, passionate, loving.- - - -what a beautiful image to have of your Mother before you were even born! ! ! ! My daughter recognized my heart beat from when she was in the womb! ! !

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