God, once had a mustache, double breasted jacket
Wollen turtleneck and held me on skis in Abruzzi
God, once was a second grade teacher, signorina Puccessi, teaching
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this reminds me of 'Oh Yeah' a kind of rap song in the opening of Paqualino Seven Beauties. It's a marvelous newsreel kind of effect and I really enjoyed reading it aloud.
I'm a Christian... and i don't clearly understand the thought(s) being presented here but through using the intellectual and informative appeal element of poetry, i can say that you write good.