Mediterranean Moments Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Mediterranean Moments

Rating: 5.0


Through times in twilights,

through dreams

in ionic breeze,

through sunrise and sunset;

somewhere in between,

we set our dreams to undulate

in the lap of fate.

Abstract notions of life

undulate at the bosom of the sea,

as children initiated to living

from the uterus of the universe.

The imaginings

of a magnificent life

yet to be lived,

yet to be felt,

yet to be fathomed.

Saturday, May 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 May 2018

Through sunrise and sunsets/somewhere in between/we set our dreams to cradle/in the lap of fate/abstract notions of life…..I appreciate the intensity of poetic expression loaded with love and emotion in the chapter of friendship! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 May 2018

It is a beautiful poem on friendship having touching expression and nice collocation. The following lines are more impressive. as children initiated to living from the uterus of the universe the imaginings of a magnificent life yet to be lived yet to be felt yet to be understood. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kostas Lagos 05 May 2018

A poem written masterfully! 11!

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