meeting eyes that lock
are filled with timeless
ageless mystery magnetic
danger souls in instant;
rapture reading a soul
in heartbeat an instant
wears fate danger signs
for souls already claimed;
this time moment committed
in soulmate love can be
a storm intensity;
sinks stray ships
on tempest raging seas
chose safe cove or raging sea;
Terence George Craddock (Shadows Of Light)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
A poem of great depth. A perceptive poem that dove into the wonders and mysteries of love. So true. The risk of this kind of love lies in the status of those affected.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you for reading and analyzing my little poem.and the dedication. I am deeply honored.
I wrote the poem 'Appreciating Diversity Poems Inspired By Rose Marie Juan-austin', inspired by my reply to a comment on my poem 'Meeting Eyes That Lock', made by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.
p2might be misunderstood. Very few poets I write poems dedicated to ever respond. There is a rich history of your poems, that have inspired me to write response poems, ranging from sometimes rather good to those which I rather liked. The chance to write is so often a joy for the writers of verse.
p1Thank you Rose Marie for the many poems and the words you have written, which have enriched my life. Some read, some write, some do both and interact with words read. There is a risk taken interacting with poems by other poets, poems are personal for most poets; our best intentions