Melody Poem by Roland Bastien

Melody

Rating: 5.0


The music lilts
Five notes - butterflies utter

A gyre brims tears
Over flowers rim

An empty shed
Twinkles - birds peer at the light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 21 June 2008

Lovely, light, flittering butterfly-poem!

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

touching poem..........10

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 07 July 2009

very light poem yet the use of words such as 'tears'and 'empty' give it a sad undertone...why?

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Cute, stunning, & moving poem. 10++

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Yelena M. 10 April 2009

A composition of beauty and light.Thanks for sharing. A.

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Tsira Goge 22 June 2008

Very beautiful and gentle poems.... This to you is not similar, my friend. It is pleasant to me happy tears.... 10... Best wishes Tsira

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