Thursday, May 11, 2006

Memoirs Of Another Time, Part 6 Comments

Rating: 5.0

You said you were happy
that I had returned
to be honest I felt
I was glad that I did
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Charles M Moore
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Linda Ori 21 May 2006

Charlie - This is one of your best. Reminded me of 'Casablanca' for some reason. Good story telling, and I was totally caught up in the piece. Like watching a movie. You are awesome! Linda

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Scarlett Treat 16 May 2006

Charles, I have faithfully followed this series of poems, and thoroughly enjoyed every one of them....I just plain hated to see them come to an end..such a good story should go on and on and on- - - - - and on. Thank you so much for bringing them to us...Good writing, interesting, beautiful descriptions of the diner, the cold, the girl, the smoky bars, it just didn't stop until the final period. When I have a few more minutes, I shall email them to myself for a permanent copy. Scarlett

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Adeaze An 11 May 2006

*sniffle, sniffle* It brought tears to my eyes. -Dallas

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Patricia Gale 11 May 2006

Lovely Charles, the memoirs all of it. The end created a lump in my throat. Thank you for sharing the story. Patricia Gale

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