Memorial Day/Veteran's Day Poem by Ben Gieske

Memorial Day/Veteran's Day

Rating: 3.1


.....MEMORIAL DAY
.....at the cemetery
counting the shadows

........Veteran's Day
the sun laying shadows
.........row after row

...........Veteran's Day
rummaging through his desk
...rust smudging my fingers

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 April 2008

Understated and succinctly penned. Poetry at its best. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Scarlett Treat 10 April 2008

Counting the shadows....what a painfully beautiful expression for numbering the gravestones. I really like this one...a keeper for me, and a ten too!

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