are like water
..............in a stream
endlessly flowing
..............into meaning
gathering
..............whatever
dissolving elements
...............cascading sentences
until becoming
...............manuscripted documents
July 7,2008
Your words flow beautifully my friend, nice read so 10 from me
words are drawn from many sources and can change their meanings/What the poet means is not neccessarily what the reader what the reader understands You did a good job with your words crystal clear
I have a very strong feeling That there is so much more in this one then at first meets the eye, , absolutely amazing, and so true, , Love duncan X
I don't know how I missed this one, its got it all: the imagery, the structure and the typography all echo the meaning.I especially like the use of parallel gerunds: '...flowing...gathering...dissolving...cascading... becoming'
The audiogram of life has to be fluent with less peaks in it. The reasons are for what we use as words can even hit back us tomorrow. The peculiarities of words has been polished beautifully in this unique poem that apperently looks simple but has a hidden meaning in it that can only be conceived by one who knows all the importance of words and their ethical usage.....a very inspirational poem Ben.......an absolute 10.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'endlessly flowing into meaning' Beautiful indeed.