____nothing glamorous, a lady
_____ walking down the stairs
______ what women do every day
_______ in any house
________ descending
_________ no Jacob’s ladder
__________ this “angel” of flesh
___________ “gift” of God to males
____________ dreaming
_____________ Dare we think we’re so special?
______________ She’s the/
_______________ artist, the/
________________ teacher, the/
_________________ creator, the/
__________________ goddess
___________________ in our midst
____________________ May Spring time come
_____________________ for this revelation
Amazing work Ben.! Both visually and verbally. Words walk where they are supposed to and I would say this is the most creative visual I have seen on Poemhunter yet. Excellent! 10 Karin Anderson
Another beautiful piece from a beautiful heart.......You painted as well as Marcel did.
a big, big applause, Sir Ben.This is stunningly creative and you are a real artist.I love the way you paint this, and the graphics.
Great image very thought evoking! ! ! ! good form-a ten! ! !
Another brilliant poetic depiction of a painting...I love the artistic form that you have used....
great homage to Marcel Duchamp. It's not X.J. Kennedy, but you have a very fine piece here, I added it to my favorites.
You are a great artitist indeed.. this again is a very imaginative work of art.. good, something different... love shan
You're so artistic and innovative in your works Ben.Woman descending a staircase, man ascends to their inner needs, to be honest.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
weeeeeee! so much beauty here! remarkable! ....10+