Ben Gieske


“nude Descending A Staircase”

Poem by Ben Gieske

____nothing glamorous, a lady
_____ walking down the stairs
______ what women do every day
_______ in any house
________ descending
_________ no Jacob’s ladder
__________ this “angel” of flesh
___________ “gift” of God to males
____________ dreaming
_____________ Dare we think we’re so special?
______________ She’s the/
_______________ artist, the/
________________ teacher, the/
_________________ creator, the/
__________________ goddess
___________________ in our midst
____________________ May Spring time come
_____________________ for this revelation





Comments about “nude Descending A Staircase” by Ben Gieske

  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (9/25/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Another brilliant poetic depiction of a painting...I love the artistic form that you have used....(Report)Reply

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  • Lillian Thomas (9/11/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    great homage to Marcel Duchamp. It's not X.J. Kennedy, but you have a very fine piece here, I added it to my favorites.(Report)Reply

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  • Ivor Hogg (8/21/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    a recognition of a simple truth.(Report)Reply

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (8/9/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    You are a great artitist indeed.. this again is a very imaginative work of art..
    good, something different...

    love
    shan(Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/21/2009 12:23:00 PM)

    You're so artistic and innovative in your works Ben.Woman descending a staircase, man ascends to their inner needs, to be honest.(Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (7/11/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    weeeeeee! so much beauty here! remarkable! ....10+(Report)Reply

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/6/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    Amazing work Ben.! Both visually and verbally. Words walk where they are supposed to and I would say this is the most creative visual I have seen on Poemhunter yet. Excellent! 10
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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (5/19/2009 1:16:00 AM)

    Another beautiful piece from a beautiful heart.......You painted as well as Marcel did.(Report)Reply

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  • Meggie GultianoMeggie Gultiano (4/21/2009 8:30:00 AM)

    a big, big applause, Sir Ben.This is stunningly creative and you are a real artist.I love the
    way you paint this, and the graphics.(Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/4/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    Great image very thought evoking! ! ! ! good form-a ten! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • James Timothy Jarrett (1/4/2009 3:16:00 PM)

    Ben, Love your staircase. Great poem with very evoking imagery.(Report)Reply

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  • A Poet Who Loves To Sing Alves (12/13/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    Ben,

    I say a touch of genius!

    Dorothy(Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (11/30/2008 7:04:00 AM)

    well done...................great write! !(Report)Reply

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  • Iohannes Silvaticus (11/17/2008 7:36:00 AM)

    The increasing length of the caesuras attach a sense of anticipation to touch the divine. Excellent(Report)Reply

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  • Elizabeth Emerick Wilholt (9/7/2008 11:19:00 PM)

    Such clever use of form to create a full expression in this poem, and the lovely perception of the woman as divine beauty in motion.(Report)Reply

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  • Will Barber (9/1/2008 10:44:00 PM)

    Most inventive. Admirable. Wit, in its true sense. - Will(Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (8/11/2008 1:22:00 AM)

    beauty in nudity and nudity in beauty...that is what poets and painters want to see...the poem laddering down just as the lady in Duchamp's painting...but the beauty inside the poem ladders up with its every step down line...10/10(Report)Reply

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  • Luis Gil (7/20/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    The artist wants to capture a meaningful image, it brings shape and content for us to decipher.(Report)Reply

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  • Subbaraman N V (7/18/2008 2:19:00 AM)

    I have not seen the painting! Yet I appreciate the beauty of the painting! Lovely poem!(Report)Reply

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  • David Desantis (7/7/2008 9:54:00 AM)

    i've seen the painting, wicked sweet...i love the adoration of women in this one, especially, she's the artist, and teacher etc etc.10/10(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, July 16, 2010