Memories Poem by whitney trott

Memories

Rating: 4.9


Memories last forever
never do they die
true friends stick together
and never say goodbye

Memories are things you cant forget
when your with your family
you give and get
when you show your niceness and generosity

Memories are things you keep
with you now and always
when with family and friends talking about the memories you laugh and you weep
and never keep the feelings away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 07 July 2009

You are right in every single word! ! .....yes, the memories last forever.....! ! 10++++ Merna

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lisa moore 07 July 2009

that expresses so much in souch little words..good work luv lisa xo :)

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i lvoe this poem great job 110% No Reason To Care

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Sara S 09 July 2009

yeah memories last forever and other people remember too so watch what you're doing! ! ! 10

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Deborah Cromer 09 July 2009

Sharing is the best way too. Some of the best memories are made when somebody shares with somebody else. Thanks for sharing your poety! :) Deborah Cromer

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Sounds like you have really good memories. I think of my memories as curses and nightmares that just won't go away. Cuz like you said, they last forever.

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no name - 05 October 2009

Sounds like a HallMark card. haha. Very good. Keep up the good work.

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Justin Greene 27 August 2009

great poem, i like it ^_^

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 July 2009

Your poem could be better by enhancing the grammar. I hope that you will do that. Thanks you.

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Silent Speaker 10 July 2009

love the structure! ! ! ! another amazing poem! ! ! ! !

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