Sunday, March 25, 2012

Memory Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am searching for you,
underneath the roots of spiked.
I called upon you,
within the mist of sorrow.
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Alex Jhon
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Faith Fimano 09 April 2012

I love the line withen the mists of sorrow.

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Alex Jhon 26 March 2012

@Ency: thank you :) @Aminath: thank you as well :) glad you all like it :)

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Ency Bearis 25 March 2012

Wonderful lyrical poem, well written.

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Aminath Neena Haneef 25 March 2012

Wow! quite impressive..... I liked your use of dialogue here! Enjoyed reading!

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