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Men At War

Rating: 5.0

War Zone
Dust up. sounds of deadly bullets and bombs
Trigger squeeze blood spill its the combat zone..
Soilders at war. I don't wanna fight i just wanna go home
I have a 6 months old baby i have not yet seen.
I dont want her to grow up without me..

Boom boom. So close to death call it the danger zone.
Call the medic my buddy just lost his legs.
Adrenaline rushing through my vains.

My hand is cut of yet i can't feel the pain. It will never end its all just the beginning.
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Sunday, October 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: army,military service,war veterans
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Millitery
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A powerful and touching write Great imagery that portrays the true story of a great soldier at the brink of death in a war zone. Beautifully written.

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What a deeply moving poem. The effects of war that it brings to humanity is beyond measure. It is a vicious cycle of violence. It takes away human lives, wrecks home and country and ultimately the whole humanity.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

War is an horrible thing, I can't imagine how it is for the Hero's who have to fight in it, a very touching poem.

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