i lost my key to heaven
i used to smile each time
i look at the sky
now i've this cold shiver
i don't face any mental problem
but still i laugh while walking
without any reason
really it's true
i stopped once at a cafe
to get a dose of caffeine
coffee was too hot
& i got my tongue scorched
i looked at the curved mug
found 3 words
fast, fresh
& friendly
and i said to myself
what i missed that day
feeling that i need to go out
& so i did
it seems i write in blue
not very sad
but just writing with blue pen
actually scratching not writing
few lines remind me of my childhood
although i can remember nothing but
playing football, fighting with boys
& kissing girls
am i supposed to finish this poem? !
dare you not to call it just hazy lines
you needn't to do
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I laugh sometimes when I walk around outside for no reason too! Sometimes the day is just so perfect and it feels so great to be free... I like this poem because you've expressed yourself through it. So what if I'm a little confused! You didn't write this for me or anyone else on here. You wrote this for you. Sometimes that's what you have to do. I did that in my 'Prisoner'. I'm not expecting anyone to understand it, but I just had so much emotion in me that I had to write it. It wouldn't matter if I(for second time) or anyone else ever read it, I just needed to get it out. And you've done a brilliant job of that here!
From the worldy yardsticks you do have a problem, dear. But, from where i see, you are doing just fine; keep it up and God bless you!
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