Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Mercy, Rain God

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Mercy O, rain God,

Down pour you shower,
Nothing will be left but fewer,
We might have committed error,
Forgive us forever and grant us favour,

Nothing will mushroom,
Flowers will not bloom,
Can you hear cry from your groom?

Worries and sad faces with gloom,
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Sulochna Pandit 19 August 2009

you should submit to rain god...10

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Raju Rajput 19 August 2009

we should offer sincere prayer...10

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Kunwar Patel 13 August 2009

we pray for rainalways....10

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Radha Seth 12 August 2009

o god show some mercy onus and spare....10

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Saroj Davde 12 August 2009

mercy o rain god on us....10

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Lalvani Rekha 19 September 2009

This question always made me puzzle. Rain did not offer peace even when dazzle, It continued to hunt and troubled always,

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Pami Panchal 16 September 2009

Down pour you shower, Nothing will be left but fewer, We might have committed error, Forgive us forever and grant us favour,

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Jigisha Vyas 14 September 2009

Down pour you shower, Nothing will be left but fewer, We might have committed error,

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Vinod Karmakar 14 September 2009

Nothing will mushroom, Flowers will not bloom, Can you hear cry from your groom

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Sahar Sahar 05 September 2009

God is merciful............

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