Mere Bhole Sajna Thehro Kutch Sunte Jao Comments

Thank you, my friend, for honoring me with your translation of my poem

Superb translation and I agree with Rajnishji's comments.... You did an excellent job by translating it with original meaning and purpose.

A beautiful poem, nicely translated.

Excellent job done by way of this wonderful translation of Kelly Kurt's poem 'Advice (Senryu Series) . Above all, this poem also brings to us the beauty and the flavor of the original poetry quite succinctly. Thank you Akhtar Jawad Sahab. I quote a few lines as below: Khali pet mat jana bakery mein sajna thehro kutch khila doon phir jana. ache aur khoobsoorat logon ko khushi dhoondhni nahin padti unke pas khushi khud chal kar aati hay.