Rajendran Muthiah

Gold Star - 15,201 Points (16.03.1950)

Mere Smiles Don't Win - Poem by Rajendran Muthiah

To win make hard work your lovely kin.
No joy you'll feel by mere gentle grin.
Your whole body gets wet
when you toil and shed sweat.
Wear you out and climb steep hills to win.

Topic(s) of this poem: smile

Form: Limerick

Comments about Mere Smiles Don't Win by Rajendran Muthiah

  • Valsa George (11/6/2015 11:21:00 PM)

    With just an insincere grin, we cannot win hearts! To get hold over others, we have to make sacrifices! In the same way, to be a victor in life, a lot of hard work is needed! Wisely put! (Report) Reply

    Rajendran Muthiah (11/7/2015 5:28:00 AM)

    You have given a different idea. That shows your excellent mind giving interpretations in a new angle. Thanks a lot.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

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