She Makes A Walkout! Poem by Rajendran Muthiah

She Makes A Walkout!

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You don't have a taste for the music of songs.
You smileto sneak into the hearts of all
and leave in a sudden making them grieve.
Your looks to lure and manoeuvresto catch
are excellent to match the wares of the whores!
Squating on the first step of fleeting wealth
You feign to be in the top with five stars!
You can amaze the dirty locals around
but you can't gain ground on the learned folks.
Your head is full of pride which searching minds lack
and you're a creature with no probing features.
You misuse the charms to deracinate
your balanced preys for a while to derange
but soon you'll lose the place encroached
In their honest minds to make a walkout
with a bent head and face marred and ashamed!

Monday, January 23, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 22 February 2012

Oh God! Unkind humanity! Ungrateful mankind! The creatures out there are our friends! Stop the mindless violence! Stop the cruel slaughter! We are thankful to you Sir! For this timely slaughter.For my part I shall refrain from eaten meat!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 September 2012

The irony in the last para' touches the heart. There is a wrong notion that non-vegetarian food only gives strength to the body. Actually my opinion is not so. Let us all mankind be veggies so that we don't harm animals and birds for 'filling our bellies.'Nice poem, Sir. Thanks and best wishes

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Valsa George 05 February 2013

Birds of varied hues and contours are a source of perennial joy! How they map their aerial routes and return to their nests is still a wonder to me! ! Without these feathered folks and their enchanting songs, how barren our lives would have been! ! Enjoyed this visit to the bird sanctuary! !

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Luo Zhihai 20 December 2020

In this world, all kinds of people have!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2020

A beautiful poem sir! The last three lines articulated the undeniable truth! Appreciated and admired....10

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

wonderful findings- Birds, plants and animals give man his essential needs. But he cuts their throats to fill his bellies. yeah really how brutal we are! great 10++++

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Saniya Galeyeva 25 January 2017

If people only were like bird, they wouldn`t kill and hurt each other at least. I think the topic of the poem is not only the relations between humans and nature, but the interaction between nations, nationalities and personalities. A great poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 January 2017

Thank you so much for your thought provoking interpretation. Lines one or two in a poem with deeper meaning appeal to people who are deep thinkers. Thanks a lot.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 21 June 2013

Nice poem about birds.

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Rajendran Muthiah

Rajendran Muthiah

Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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