Sonny Rainshine


Metamorphosis - Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Chrysalis: jade pendant,
suspended in the wind
from a dill weed stem
like a Chinese lantern.

Beauty concentrated,
compressed,
bottled up,
wired to explode.


Comments about Metamorphosis by Sonny Rainshine

  • (4/30/2006 9:08:00 AM)


    Fine poem, Sonny. Excellent imagery. You might consider writing it as
    2 stanzas of four lines each. The second stanza could read:
    Beauty concentrated,
    compressed,
    bottled up,
    wired to explode.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 30, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 30, 2006


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